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Some people believe that employees should stay in the same job for the rest of their lives. Others think they should switch jobs at least once during their career. To what extent do you agree / disagree?

#people #employees #job #rest #lives #switch #jobs #career
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ajority
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the majority
of individuals h
as become
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have become
more aware of what university program they have to pursue, in order to launch a great
career
 that will lead them to acquire a high salary in the future and that will achieve the
life
 that they have been dreaming for.
However
, staying in one company or running just one business it must be changeable in
this
 century, to make people
life
 more interesting and stimulating. y
et,
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Yet
 a small n
umbers
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number
of people b
elieves
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believe
that working at the same
job
 from the beginning until the end of their
life
 its better than working in a different s
pots
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spot
with different skills from while to while.
In contrast
, other folks t
hinks
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think
i
ts
it is
it's
crucial to make alterations and changes in your
life
 positions.
However
, in
this
 essay I will a
nalyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
both sides of the argument before presenting my opinion
.
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.
f
irstly,
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Firstly
 Some people thinks that it is good for the employees to continue working for their current employer throughout their
life
 extension.
n
evertheless,
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Nevertheless
 being in a stable
career
 for a long period will boost the employer skills and qualifications that will lead to a convenient
life
. A prime example of that will be a study by the Harvard university that indicates 50 percent of the American professional who have been working in the same
job
 for over 20 years have superior salary package and great senior positions.
Secondly
,
on the contrary
, other folks b
elieves
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believe
that altering your
j
ob consider
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job, consider
as a
life
 changing to extend the numerous opportunities to acquire loads of new skills, new friends ties and new different
job
 locations which will lead you to travel around the country or the world. To illustrate, recent world bank studies showed that 44% of the workers who have been switching their position have a significant health according to the yearly medical surveys. f
oretheremore,
in addition
Furthermore
furthermore
 companies prefer the independent employer who has the courage to obtain skills which they need from his own experience via communicating and involving in a major o
perations
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operation
and meeting others who are in a high position to gain the knowledge and the experience that they had. To recapitulate, working in one place for a long time is not an enormous p
roblem but
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problem, but
for a better and entertainment
life
, people should spend their
career
life
 by f
elling
the experiencing of affective and emotional states
feeling
satisfied which will be w
ith
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to
tempt a new experience from while to while.
h
owever,
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However
 I Personally believe that navigate from a place to another is suitable for everyone and should everybody to try d
iffirent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
things not only about
career
life
.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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