Some people think that the government should be responsible for crimes prevention, while others believe that it is responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.

It is argued by many that
government
supposed to take ownership of stopping crimes,
this
essay agrees with the statement, it is their soul responsibility to provide us security.​ the essay will first look at why it is the
job
of
government
and
then
how we can help the
government
via supporting them or becoming able to defend ourselves. i believe it is governments soul responsiblity to provide us a safe enviroment via using all the resource which is available because if someone is running a country after forming a
government
he promise his people to keep them safe and we taxes for that
for example
:- i spent more than 30% of my salary on taxes. So i believe it is my right to feel safe in a country where i am being a good citizen paying all my taxes and supporting the
government
in every manner.
However
few people say that it is our own
duty
to keep us and our family safe and we should know how to defend outself in times of need. i agree to some extent that yes, we should we able to take a stand for us and our loved ones but it is our personal
duty
not our professional
duty
our professional
duty
is to do our regular
job
. sometimes we cant take the stand
for example
:- the crowd is huge or the person has arms or you are not strong enough. because we are not trained for that. so
to conclude
i believe it is governments and defence ministry's
job
to keep us safe
however
we should
also
help others if you are capable of doing so because no matter if it is your
job
or not but it is right in the name of humanity

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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