Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with your friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holidays. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter.

Dear Yash & Jai, Hope you both are doing well. I am grateful that despite

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your hectic working hours, you guys spent quality time with me during my vacations in Canada. It was an entertaining and memorable

trip

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with both of you.

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, thanks a lot for sharing the photos over google drive. The picture quality is amazing and

natural

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scenery view is captured amazingly. After returning from tour, I had

long

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working schedule at

office

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due to year closing activities. I could not find

suitable

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time to share my overall experience of

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trip

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. Today, after seeing images, it refreshes my memory and I sat down to tell you both how amazing, full of joy person you are. During summer, I am planning to go

for

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trekking and river rafting. I would suggest you guys

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come here for your summer

vacations

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and stay at my place. After listening to our Canada

trip

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stories, my family is

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excited to meet you. Do let me know about your plans, I will organize our

trip

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accordingly

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. Have a great time. Best, Seema

Jan 18, 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

182 words

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