Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with your friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holidays. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter.

Dear Yash & Jai, Hope you both are doing well. I am grateful that despite
of
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your hectic working hours, you guys spent quality time with me during my vacations in Canada. It was an entertaining and memorable
trip
with both of you.
Also
, thanks a lot for sharing the photos over google drive. The picture quality is amazing and
natural
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scenery view is captured amazingly. After returning from tour, I had
long
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working schedule at
office
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due to year closing activities. I could not find
suitable
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time to share my overall experience of
trip
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. Today, after seeing images, it refreshes my memory and I sat down to tell you both how amazing, full of joy person you are. During summer, I am planning to go
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trekking and river rafting. I would suggest you guys
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come here for your summer
vacations
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and stay at my place. After listening to our Canada
trip
stories, my family is
also
excited to meet you. Do let me know about your plans, I will organize our
trip
accordingly
. Have a great time. Best, Seema

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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