A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money,either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years,or to pay for two open concerts.It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter .describe the benefits of sponsoring the the sports team .summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts .say how you think the company should spend the money
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Dear sir or madam,
I am writing
this
letter in response to feedback that you have asked us about the utilisation of money.
First
, I will tell you about local
children's sports team. Correct article usage
the local
This
team is very good and it practices football regularly. This
is the source of recreation for our youngsters. Besides
, they have participated in many tournaments but due to lack of proper training and equipment could not perform well in major competitions.
Our society is also
conducting open-air concerts on different occasions but it could not afford the high price of some good bands. The space for the shows is also
too small. Most of the time it is overcrowded due to insufficient space.
So I think both of the activities need a certain amount of money and it is very kind of you that you want to take this
social responsibility. In my suggestion, you should spend on sponsoring our football team as it decides the future of some of our good players and children will take it more seriously as a career.
I look forward to hearing from you.
yours sincerelySubmitted by nvnchaudhary on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite