The best way to remove poverty in developing countries is to provide 6 years of free education to all children .so that they can read,write and use numbers.do you agree or disagree?

In
21st century
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the 21st century
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,
poverty
in some developing nations is at an alarming rate.It is not true that
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,
poverty
can be vanish
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can vanish
; if free
education
is given to children for six years because they can grasp knowledge about read
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write and use numbers.I disagree with
this
statement and I will discuss the reasons of disagreement in the upcoming paragraphs. To embark on
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,
education
is the
third
eye
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but it is not sufficient to remove
poverty
.
First
and foremost point is that, job opportunities are
also
essential
with
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to
education
. In
this
materialistic epoch
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job is the basic necessity of everyone's life to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their financial needs. To cite a pertinent example, India is a diverse country and almost one in seven percent of individuals who are educated
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but still unemployed
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;
because due to inflation
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the cost of everything is high and individuals need jobs to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their
objective case of they
them
theirs
needs
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Needs
.
Thus
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,
only
education
is not enough to remove
poverty
from developing countries.
Furthermore
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in
this
contemporary scenario
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it is important to control
undistribution
of income and provide health and
food
related amenities in developing countries.
In other words
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administration of progressing nations should impose
high
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higher
taxes on rich people and low taxes on poor people
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,
which helps to control
undistribution
of income
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.
Besides
this
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,
regime
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the regime
should provide free medical facilities and
food
amenities for the multitudes
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who live under
poverty line
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the poverty line
. To illustrate
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,
in India
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law makers provide
food
to
poverty
stricken people at fair shops on a nominal price
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.
Thus
, medical and
food
amenities
is
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are
also
important To recapitulate
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the aforementioned paragraphs described the reason of disagreement
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I staunchly believe that
poverty
cannot be remove only by providing free
education
to people for 6 years
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • eradicating
  • fundamental literacy
  • numeracy skills
  • financial barriers
  • low-income families
  • promoting equality
  • child labor
  • vocational training
  • comprehensive development
  • employability
  • external aid
  • sustainability
  • significant financial investment
  • infrastructure development
  • underprivileged areas
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