Nowadays some professionals such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries?
t is irrefutable that doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much
higher
than ordinary workers. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss Correct word choice
more
this
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also
suggest some other occupations, which deserve higher Linking Words
salaries
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To begin
with, Linking Words
professions
, Use synonyms
such
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medical
, engineering and law, require far more Replace the word
medicine
years
of study than what ordinary workers have to do. Use synonyms
For example
, for a basic M.Linking Words
B
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B.S
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or B.S
years
of study is required, and after that to specialize in any specific field another three to five Use synonyms
years
are required. A person with a simple M.Use synonyms
B
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B
.S degree does not earn all that high. Similar is the case with engineering and law Use synonyms
professions
. They have to undergo many Use synonyms
years
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finally
reach their telephone-figure Linking Words
salaries
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Secondly
, it requires a lot of financial input to attain these degrees. Many students have to take loans to study, which they have to repay later on. They may remain in debt for many Linking Words
years
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while
they pay off their student loans. Linking Words
Therefore
, their higher Linking Words
salaries
are justified. Ordinary workers, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, do not have to spend huge amounts on their college and university fees. What is more, some of these Linking Words
professions
are round- the-clock Use synonyms
professions
very challenging physically Use synonyms
as well as
emotionally. Linking Words
Finally
, it would not be wrong to say that not all Linking Words
such
professionals are highly paid. Many of them keep struggling throughout their lives. There are many other jobs, which merit higher Linking Words
salaries
. I believe that teachers and nurses are doing commendable jobs for the society. They should be paid lucrative Use synonyms
salaries
so that Use synonyms
people
want to join these occupations. Use synonyms
Then
, there are Linking Words
people
working in our defense services Use synonyms
such
as the army, navy and air force. Because of them, we are leading secure lives. Linking Words
That is
why they deserve higher pay-packages. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
people
working in high -isk Use synonyms
professions
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such
as fire-fighters and security guards should be paid more and Linking Words
finally
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people
in administrative posts Use synonyms
such
as IAS and IPS officers should have higher Linking Words
salaries
. Use synonyms
To sum up
, there is no doubt that doctors, lawyers are receiving high Linking Words
salaries
, but they rightly deserve them and many other Use synonyms
professions
are there which need to be paid more.Use synonyms
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
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