The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The rapid growth and penetration of technology in society has brought substantial changes in human
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
Its
Suggestion
It's
argued that in future brick and mortar stores will be closed due to electronic purchasing.
However
,
this
essay doesn’t buy
this
viewpoint and suggest
alternative
Suggestion
alternatives
an alternative
.
This
essay will discuss how traditional outlets will survive and Why people are not going to abandon them in
future
Suggestion
the future
. Supermarket run is considered as
best form
Suggestion
the best form
of entertainment because limited safe going out opportunities available to them. In out of
home recreation
Accept comma addition
home, recreation
, malls are considered safe and provide plenty of options for children as well. People utilize
this
opportunity to step outside their homes with their children and spent time in malls. In
this
way they can exhaust their work tiredness and enjoy time without any fear or safety issues. To illustrate, I would like to give
example
Suggestion
an example
examples
the example
of my town. In my town, due to bomb blasts and harassment issues, parks and amusement parks are not safe now.
Hence
families use to choose Emporium Mall for shopping rather depending on order from websites.
In addition
to
this
, most people are still with traditional mindset they continue to believe on
experiencing tangible form
Suggestion
an experience tangible form
experience tangible form
of product before placing any order. They tend to prefer
this
method because they think without seeing
product
Suggestion
the product
a product
before payment could be a risk due to quality or packaging issues. On screens there is no
such
kind of option available. To summarize, we are able to say that
although
online purchasing is
growing but
Accept comma addition
growing, but
still it cannot replace traditional retail. Physical form of shopping will continue to survive and people will never abandon
this
at all
hence
not all stores will shut down
.
Accept space
.

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