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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays, the
internet
 has become a part of human life. People use the
internet
 to support their activities, well as school, work, sport, or even shopping. It is thought by some people that using the
internet
 in the daily basis can simplify an activity. Over the disadvantages, the
internet
 has more advantages that make people do anything through the
internet
 without
hesitate
Suggestion
hesitating
. One of the examples is shopping or buying things on the
internet
,
such
 as books, air tickets, and groceries. It is becoming popular and is becoming a new habit among teenagers or even adults to get the items they want online.
Moreover
, many online stores are available that serve online purchases so everyone can get the items only
on
Suggestion
in
with
 one click.
In
addition people
Accept comma addition
addition, people
 can find the stores easily; they can find it on websites or download store applications on Smartphone. The benefits of doing online shopping are saving time and money. It saves time because everyone is able to choose and buy anywhere and anytime only via mobile phone.
This
 would be the best choice for some people who are very busy with their work or school and have no time to go to the store. In the other hand, it
also
 saves money. It
does not required
Suggestion
does not require
 fare. There is no cost for
taxi
Suggestion
a taxi
taxis
 or public transportation to get the store and
then
 go back to home.
Furthermore
, everyone does not need to take money out for snack that sometimes people are always doing when they are shopping. In conclusion, while there are plus points to
doing
Suggestion
do
 online shopping, everybody must still do it wisely and carefully.

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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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