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Human activity has a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

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Scientists believe that
earth
Suggestion
the earth
 will become uninhabitable by 2050 due to the extensive damage being done to the environment by humans. While many people believe that the fate of
earth
Suggestion
the earth
 is doomed, others are of the opinion that there are still chances of reviving it, if preventive measures are taken. In
this
 essay, I will delve into both views and provide my support for the latter view. It is undeniably true that humans have gone too far in exploiting earth’s natural resources and many believe that it is futile to even try to save it. I believe the main reason for
this
 thought is our inherent selfish nature. Many people would rather live comfortably utilizing all resources rather than worry about the future generation.
Therefore
, it is quite evident that people are not ready to come out of their comfort-zone, despite knowing that they are destroying the
planet
.
On the other hand
, it is never too late to take steps to protect our
planet
 from
further
 damage.
This
 is because there are numerous initiatives and organizations already in place waiting to get the necessary support and funds from the government and common citizens.
This
 could be achieved by taking small steps
such
 as placing billboards on the busiest traffic intersections or posting relevant energy conservation tips on the social media. Since a majority of the population uses
subways
Suggestion
the subways
 for their daily commute, posters could be pasted on the subway walls as well. Obviously, we can do a lot if we stand united. In conclusion, even though, it may seem like there is nothing we can do about the present state of our
planet
, it is never too late to take preventive measures. We have a collective responsibility to save
this
planet
 for our future generations

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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