Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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, if the academic institutions should accept the exact same number of men and women in the classes. In my opinion,

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Fully explain your ideas

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In this technological era, personal information is stored on computers by many companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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