Human activity has a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the rate of destroying
wildlife
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are rapidly increasing
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is rapidly increasing
by by human actions. Many people state that
negative impact
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the negative impact
on trees and animals
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of
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actions cannot be elder whilst
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other
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others
argue and vocalize that by taking preventive steps
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mitigated
. In my opinion
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governments and public efforts can change
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negative effect. It is
undeniable truth
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an undeniable truth
that
insincere human behaviour
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the insincere human behaviour
of towards to
forest
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the forest
and animals
are being
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is being
adverse ramification on their lives. The in cases of
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, majority of the people in
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century
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selfish, they want to utilize all natural
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resources
rather than thinking about upcoming generation.
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scientist
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scientists
a scientist
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predict in advance
forecast
that within hundred years world will say zero resource for utilise from nature.
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instance can bolster the existing concept that, human action and selfishness continuously affecting
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and Woodland. Government and public should be pragmatic about the steps for elevating
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issue. In order to preserve animals and trees
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government must make strict rules for cutting trees and as well as for preying wild animals.
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, media and TV must promote about the repercussions of deforestation so that, the general public can aware about
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problem
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instance, In Africa by taking laws and public awareness
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decrease
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decreases
the rate of
deforstation
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
and preying in Africa's forest. Overall, strict rules and public awareness can change the negative impact on
wildlife
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and forest. In conclusion, mostly people actions are suffering trees and animals.It may seem like that there is nothing to do about
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it, but
, it is completely preposterous. Preventive measure and public responsibility can alter
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impact and it can save our planet
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In my opinion
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we should be responsible for
saved
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saving
our plants and
wildlife
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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