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People who read for pleasure have better imagination and language skills than those who prefer watching TV. Discuss .

#people #pleasure #imagination #language #skills #tv
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • imagination
  • language skills
  • active engagement
  • visualize
  • stimulates
  • sentence structures
  • vocabulary
  • styles of writing
  • grammatical structures
  • cognitive and analytical skills
  • self-paced learning
  • comprehension and retention
  • visual and auditory stimuli
  • attention span
  • informative and entertaining
  • passive
  • demanding
  • interpret and create meaning
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