The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015.

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The bar chart and table give information about a country's

export

earnings

from five groups of

products

in 2015 and 2016. It is noticeable that

export

revenues in all but one of the five product categories increased over the period shown.

While

petroleum

products

were the

highest earning

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exports in both years, the textile industry saw the most significant growth in

earnings

Export

earnings

from petroleum

products

rose from around $61

billion

in 2015 to $63

billion

in 2016, which was an increase of 3%. Income from engineered goods reached a similar level. The country’s

export

earnings

from these goods went up by 8.5% to approximately $62

billion

in 2016. From 2015 to 2016, there was a 15.24% increase in

export

revenue from textiles, with

earnings

rising from roughly $25

billion

to over $30

billion

By contrast

, there was almost no change in the amount of money earned from agricultural

products

, which remained at just over $30

billion

Finally

, the only decline in income occurred in the gems and jewellery product group, where

export

earnings

fell by around 5% to approximately $40

billion

in 2016.

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