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Internet is important part of life ?Are you agree or not agree explain this.

#internet #part #life
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The Internet is used in all fields day by day. If we can say that the net is a main part of our life
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 not wrong statement.Internet is that source on which our search everything
that is
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 required. At
this
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 point
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 fully agree with
this
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 strong statement.
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furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will explain all about value of WWW In my
first
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 opinion is that if we need any information
then
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 without doing time waste
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will prefer net to search because it is time
consumable
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consuming
 effort.
Secondly
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,
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,
we can buy anything by online anywhere anytime
,
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,
no objection will occur.As we see that
,
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,
teaching and learning becomes very
easy fast
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easy, fast
 on
web
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the web
.I think if net facility is not
available
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available, then
then
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 travelling and banking gets more difficult.
because
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Because
 now we are doing booking online from home any time by paying online from
card
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the card
 as well as net banking. In
conclosion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
consolation
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 sum up my ideas about internet uses.
morever there
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Moreover, there
Moreover there
Morever there
 are
lot
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lots
 of features of
net
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the net
.
that
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That
take
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takes
 place important value in
himan
characteristic of humanity
human
 life.Today our life
depend
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depends
 on
internet
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the internet
 for
dufferent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
 needs.
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