The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

A big part of knowledge about the world is formed by the mass media at
this
technological time. A lots media take money from the government and large international companies. We cannot ignore
this
fact and we should understand that the news does not show a full picture truly. An information
can be hide
Suggestion
can hide
can be hidden
partly or wholly,
also
it is able to show only positive part of an incident or a fact. Politics do not like when their mistake or unpopular decisions become known widely.
As a result
, we have the corrupted news. And
this
problem does not connect only with official TV channels, radio and newspapers. Internet bloggers or resources tried to do the same, but they face more critics. Users see commentaries and different views on situation which help to receive more trustful data. Unfortunately, new technology is used for creating a fake news. Video and audio records, photographs are varied and used as a piece of evidence to approve any face news.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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