the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many crimes are committed,
dividing
Wrong verb form
divided
by
three main types, within Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
Change preposition
into
Overall
, in the Linking Words
beginning
burglary had the highest Add a comma
,beginning
rate
Use synonyms
while
, Linking Words
then
, it decreased dramatically. Linking Words
On the contrary
, car theft had a high level, but it remained steady. Linking Words
Moreover
, robbery had a low Linking Words
rate
and its Use synonyms
rate
do not fluctuate significantly.
Regarding Use synonyms
burglary
Correct article usage
the burglary
rate
, in 2003, a number of almost 3500 incidents occur in Newport city centre. The following year there was a small increase, but after that, Use synonyms
burglary
Correct article usage
the burglary
rate
fall and in 2008, it reached its lowest level at 1100 incidents. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, it remained steady between 2008 and 2012, covering the Linking Words
second
position of rates of crime.
Observing car theft, it is interesting to note that it decreased a little bit from 2800 to around 2000 between 2005 and 2006 and Linking Words
then
, car Linking Words
theft’s
Change noun form
theft
rate
rose slowly until it reached Use synonyms
in
2012 the same level Change preposition
apply
of
the beginning. Change preposition
in
Thus
, Linking Words
this
type of crime became the most common.
Another important crime is robbery which is the least common and its Linking Words
rate
Use synonyms
remain
always between 500 and 800 incidents.Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the contrary".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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