These days it is very common to have people from two different generations mix in the same workplace. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this situation? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.
Smart companies always utilize their human resources smartly. Nowadays, there is a growing trend of using diverse age group employees working together in the same field. The most prominent advantages of these approaches are the utilization of the senior employees' experiences and the youngster's latest education-related technology.
However
, another school of thought believes that older employees can not perform efficiently and teenagers would have a problem in team collaboration. According to me, if employees mutually work together, despite the minor problems, the organization could get more profits.
In conclusion, As I have discussed, there are advantages and disadvantages of this
situation. However
, I believe that it's more advantageous for companies to allocate the work without having any concerns about their ages, which will outweigh the minor issues, so Working together with different mindsets gave positive results.Submitted by hamdislam on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite