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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays, robotics and
information
 technology are gradually replacing human in many
life
 applications and in industries. For some people,
this
 evolution will bring so many beneficial effects to their
life
 soon.
However
, other people may have some concerns that we are not ready for a world in which robotics dominate humanity. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion about the fact that the evolution in robotics and
information
 technology are more
possitve
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
passive
 impact to our
life
. On one hand, people have a valid concern that their jobs will be in serious conditions when more and more factories are using robots or
information
 systems to replace workforces.
We
Suggestion
Our
 people have had
experience
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experiences
 to witness the vast development in industries all over the world where many
labors
a person afflicted with leprosy
lepers
labourers
 were replaced by robots or computer systems which can work much more effectively and save more operation costs for companies.
This
 leads to redundance in many workplaces and more and
more worker
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more work
 to be laid off.
On the other hand
, thanks to developments of artificial
intelliegence
the ability to comprehend; to understand and profit from experience
intelligence
intelligences
intelligent
 people have
much more possitive effects
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a much more positive effect
much more positive effects
much more positive effect
much more possitive effect
. For
long period
Suggestion
a long period
 of time people had been
enjoyed
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enjoying
 a better
life
by
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with
 tons of clever applicants
such
 as robot cleaners, or smart home devices which have helped people save
lot
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a lot
lots
 of time for household chores. Or the developments in
automotives
of or relating to motor vehicles
automotive
 industries by applying
information
 technology
such
 as pilot driving or driving assistance systems, people have more safe when driving on roads. In conclusion,
although
 there are some potential risks in job redundance because of the development of artificial
intelligent
Suggestion
intelligence
 when robotics and
information
 can replace human. I still see the
possitive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
positives
 impact that it can bring to us and assist our
life
 more enjoyable.
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