Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Why do think this is? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There are increasing numbers of youths migrating from remote areas to urbane areas leading to the fact that only

elder

advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)

older

people are still living in the

countryside

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. In my opinion,

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is a natural phenomenon happening when young people look for a better job in the big cities than it is in small villages. Anyway, I think it causes negative impacts with overcrowded in cities and pressuring on its infrastructure, and fewer the workforces to develop agriculture in rural areas. Looking for a job is always one of the most important factors for the young people. Many companies establish their businesses and facilities in big cities rather than in remote areas.

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, there will be greater opportunities for the youths to get job offers as well as a higher paid salary in cities.

Vast movement

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A vast movement

from

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countryside

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the countryside

to live in cities of the youth can lead to the fact that cities will suffer with

overwhelming amount

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an overwhelming amount

the overwhelming amount

of

habitants

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the habitants

. Its public services may not develop fast enough to satisfy increasing numbers of people day by day.

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, public transportation could be overloaded during peak hours; hospitals or healthcare clinics are always full of patients. As

such

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,

authorites

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the authorities

authorities

always encourage companies to build their factories in

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countryside

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the countryside

in order to divert people coming to

cities

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the cities

. The wave of youth movement to cities

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causes the phenomenon that there are only elders living in

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countryside

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the countryside, then

the countryside then

then

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there are not enough workforces for

argicutural

relating to or used in or promoting agriculture or farming

agricultural

development

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.

Then

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more farms will be abandoned. In

conlusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

, more and more young people are moving to cities from rural areas

nowsday

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to look for a

development

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in their career.

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cause negative

development

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that cities will suffer more pressure on its public services as well as it may decrease the

development

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for

argiculture

a large-scale farming enterprise

agriculture

.