Describe how the situation of burns in Australia has impacted on the wildlife

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Nowadays we are concerned about the environmental issues which have an important impact on our planet. Around the world, natural environments are destroyed by

the

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apply

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human activities like the removal of vegetation to extract mineral resources or to create land farming. In less developed countries, forests are cut down for fuel or to clear land for farming.

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, Deforestation is the main cause of the extinction of

wildlife

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and

conservation

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the conservation

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of natural habitats. WWF

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also

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called

world wild found

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World Wild Found

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for

nature

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Nature

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, is an international non-profit organisation which provides animals with the basic supplies necessary for their survival. It works in the field of wilderness preservation, and the reduction of human impact on the environment. Right now they are working on

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an Australia

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Australia

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Australian

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bushfire emergency asking people a donation for help them save

wildlife

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and when the fires have cleared, restore their lost forests. With the money raised, the

Australia

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Australian

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teams

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local organizations will carry out work including : Providing emergency funds to care for injured

wildlife

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as well as

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Helping restore homes for koalas and other

wildlife

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Planting the first 10000 trees urgently needed in

koalas

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koalas'

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habitats and supporting the response, recovery and restoration teams in any possible other ways. They

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encourage young people to have a 3 to

6 month

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volunteer internship experience working with WWF in

such

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places as Bolivia, Madagascar, Pacific etc. In conclusion, only beneficial

initiative

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can provide them with the resources they need for their survival ,even if nowadays the

risks

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of extinction for

wildlife

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is still alive.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

256 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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