Some people believe that is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Bad situations are there and some people decide

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to accept

them and staying in comfortable and controlled zone while others don't and

then

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they decide to fight for what they desire and go ahead until reaching their goals. Without a doubt, in my opinion, pursuing your objectives is better than used to yourself with a not so good scenario, because if you try to change it you could have success and get modify your current way. When you are facing a hard moment, you can choose to stay and wait. Sometimes seems the best to do because you know

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then

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you can not only control but

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preview everything what could happen becoming

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situation simply easier.

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, you will never know what could happen if it were different, and if you fight for change. Even though, you decide

don’t confront

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not to confront

for the reason that fear. You are afraid about combating and, maybe, failing. In the other hand, you can prefer to struggle strongly seeking for improvements, looking at the new future based

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these changes, going

after

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over

to implement your plan, putting it in practice, trying to increase your chances to be better, no giving up, going ahead, no stop.

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way, you will make sure the possibility of

positive outcome

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a positive outcome

positive outcomes

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end

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the end

, the best part of all

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it is you will have sure that you have tried with all of your strength, if you got the result, it will be your reward, but if you did not get, you will have sure it did not happen because you missed the

chance of to give

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chance to give

your best

for

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adjust.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

273 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Contentment
Resilience
Personal growth
Endurance
Initiative
Advancement
Catalyst
Financial stability
Status quo
Innovation
Missed opportunities
Life satisfaction
Adverse situations
Taking control
Risk assessment
Change management
Self-improvement
Motivation
Stagnation
Proactivity

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Some people believe that is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Fully explain your ideas

The picture below shows Bell Hill farm in 1976 and the changes that took place in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changes because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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