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Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging? Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.

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The concern of hygienic and organic
food
 has become the popular discourse of the day. Apart from the quality another thing that matter a lot is the packaging of
food
. The over packaging of
food
 is the folly of the
producer
 while the acceptance of
such
food
 is a big mistake on the part of
c
onsumer.
Suggestion
consumers
 I would like to flash a bright light on both perspectives in the subsequent paragraphs. To initiate in the context of
producer
, he is responsible for providing t
he good
Suggestion
the best
best
quality
food
 to the consumers in b
est possible way.
Suggestion
the best possible way
 It is the liability of the provider to make and pack eatables i
n appropriate way
Suggestion
in an appropriate way
inappropriate way
in the appropriate way
to ensure the good state of things. Apart from these practical issues, he is supposed to follow the moral obligation of staying loyal to his profession by taking the responsibility of well being of the people who consumes
food
. The price and taxes can
also
 be reduced by minimizing the extra packaging in order to make the product more economical and
consumer
 f
avorable.
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
 Moving towards the
consumer
’s side, the buyers should take care of the consequences of buying the each product. They should consider the cost effective matters, health level, hygiene and many more facts and figures. If the producers deny to purchase the over packaged product
then
 it will make the
producer
 a
ware
Suggestion
awareness
about the bad effects of selling over packaged
food
. So, the
consumer
 must take into consideration the ill effect of wrapping eatable into piles of paper. To put two and two together, it is plausible to state that both the
producer
 and
consumer
 ought to ponder over the matter. It will escalate the sales of
p
roducer
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the producer
and will
also
 prove budget friendly to the
consumer
.
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