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High jobs demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect other or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, people in general go to
work
 when they are sick for many reasons. Maybe because they think than can lose their job because high
jobs
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job
job's
 demands, or simply a sense of commitment. In spite to accomplish some very important tasks, there are many
reason
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reasons
 to don’t go to
work
 when we are sick. In my opinion
that is
 a bad decision.
First
 of all, when someone
go
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goes
 to
work
 sick, your
health
 can get worse, because their body needs to take a rest, or maybe take some medication. If doesn’t attend their
health
, your sick can affect your performance.
Also
, there are high possibilities to infect
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 and
this
 can affect the environment of our
work’s
Suggestion
work
 place.
Second
 of all, when someone
go
Suggestion
goes
 to
work
 sick, it is possible lose strength for other important responsibilities.
For instance
, if we are married and have got children, we need to spend time with our family. It
is very important accomplish
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accomplishes very important
is very important accomplish
 a lot of personal tasks or obligations, not only our
jobs
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job
 obligations. In my case, my family or my personal life is more important than my job, for that I always prioritize my
health
. To conclude, in my opinion people
should not got
Suggestion
should not get
 to
work
 and stay home if they are sick, because their
health
 is more important that their job. If improve our
health
, we will can do our
work
 successfully and attend other responsibilities without problems.

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