8.  Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.

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How

ar do you agree or disagree with the above views? Give re

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reasons

or your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or

experience

. It is well-accepted that

university

certificate or

diploma

is one of must accesses during many

job

applications in current

job

force;

therefore

, the majority of parents tackle to help their child or children be enrolled in one of to

p universities. 

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the top universities

 While many people support that completing a course of

university

will ensure a well-paid occupation, others claim that

experience

gained from work after school is more important to secure a good occupation. I te

nds t

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tend

am tending

have tended

o ag

ree the former.

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agree with the former

The essay will discuss the importance and necessity of completing a course of

university

education. 

To begin

with,

university

education ha

ve been c

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has been

had been

ommon among youngsters worldwide due to that cu

rricula c

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curriculum

omposed for each subject ar

e i

a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)

area

n terms of professional advices in order to meet the demand in the workforce market place.

Therefore

, completing a course in

university

will learn the basic skills and knowledges so that new graduates will be more competent for jobs they apply .

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.

For example

, after graduating from

university

and obtaining a degree in accounting, graduates hired in banks or companies are competent in many basic skills,

such

as reading, writing and computer skills as well.

Therefore

, employs do not start to train them from ba

sic level.

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the basic level

a basic level

A

diploma

or certificate not only indicates the level of ed

ucation but

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education, but

also

imply what kinds of knowledge and skills that the graduates possess after completing all required courses.

In addition

,

university

courses provide a systemic approach in training the learners in all aspects which are required in workforce place.

Although

 some people advocate that

experience

gained during working are more important because hand-on

experience

is not offered by

university

courses, the skills learned as working is not systemic and only focus on certain areas in terms of the jobs.

For instance

, working as as

sistant a

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an assistant

fter grade-12

diploma

provides opportunities to master some skills,

such

as organizing skills, interpersonal skills or communication skills;

however

, some skills

such

as precise writing skills, an

alyzing s

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analysing

kills and appraising articles skills might need to learn through

university

courses.  Allover,

university

courses will provide opportunities for learners to learn many basic skills which are necessary for their future careers. The courses will assist learners to prepare the tasks in workforce worldwide.

Therefore

, I support that before obtaining a full-time

job

in

job

work, it is necessary to earn a degree from

university

or

diploma

.