Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, art has become renowned all around the

world

and more people are interested in it. It is often argued that giving full freedom to artists is indispensable. I am personally in

favor

promote over another

favour

this

opinion and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs before a conclusion is drawn. It is quite clear that giving liberty to artists

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attract more people to art since they will no be

affraid

filled with fear or apprehension

afraid

of the

consequnces

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequences

consequence

they have to deal with when they express their innovative ideas and

this

result in

culture

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cultural

enrichment.

For instance

, in developing countries array of restrictive regulations are imposed on artists which lead to the increase of artists' immigration since they are not allowed to express their

thought

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thoughts

freely.

Thus

, providing a rigid system for artists

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push the country to be more rough and have robotic generations. It is worth pointing out that, the main goal of an artist is about broadening public knowledge and inhibiting violence by depicting and criticising social and political issues. Even some artists travel around the

world

to display various cultures and religion to eliminate discrimination and show the

world

that all the people with different beliefs and skin

colors

a flag that shows its nationality

colours

can live together in peace.

Therefore

, limiting

artists

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the artists

inhibits nations from understanding each other and lighten the flames of war. One could draw

conclusio

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the conclusion

a conclusion

n that giving full freedom to artists help the nations

to hav

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have

e a heart to heart talk and

develop

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

e empathy around the

world

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Topic Vocabulary:

creativity
freedom of expression
innovative
ethical considerations
societal morals
unregulated
provoke thought
controversy
government regulation
censorship
diverse perspectives
artistic expression

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