Success is often measured by materials and wealth. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a person successful.
Most of the times
materialistic stuff
and richness are the two major components to judge someone is Suggestion
the materialistic stuff
sucessful
or not. having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
Although
wealth plays a vital role to show social status in the contemporary world, I personally believe a true success depends on happiness. Linking Words
This
essay will argue that plenty of money cannot make a person happy if there is no inner peace and end with a Linking Words
reasonsed
conclusion.logically valid
reasoned
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite