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Some people think that it is necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures. Others say that books , films and the internet can be used as a source of information about different cultures. Do you agree or disagree?

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It us argued that by some individuals
travel
 to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
place
 is the essential to learn about another culture
.
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However
,
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other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 think that people can get the information about foreign culture from the
internet
 and books along with
films
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the films
.
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 While
,
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 I personally believe that
tavelling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
place
 is
good
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the best
 way to know more about other cultures because people can feel all the moments and get more experience rather than by books or
internet
 as well as some people not like to
reading
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read
 books
.
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 To being with
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,
 people can get more knowledge and
also
 experience by
tavelling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 other
region
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regionally
 than reading books or watch films
.
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For example
,
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 if masses read the book to
known
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know
 about foreign cultures
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 they not feel the experience of the other culture they can only imagine
.
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 But on the other side if people go to other
place
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place, then
then
 they enjoy all the moments and
also
 click some pictures for the memory
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Therefore
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 by the
travel
 to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
palce
a point located with respect to surface features of some region
place
 people can get more information as
comparison
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a comparison
 the reading books
.
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 Apart from
that some
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that, some
 demos not prefer to
reading
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read
 books to
known
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know
 about other cultures
.
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 In the techno oriented era the youngsters have a keen interest
to
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in
 travelling they not prefer
read
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reading
 the books and
also
 watch the films related to other cultures
.
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Moreover
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,
 sometime
internet
provide
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provides
 wrong information about
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
place
.
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 So people can not believe all the time on
internet
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the internet
.
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Thus
,
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,
mostly
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most
 people prefer to
travel
 other places than sit at home search on
internet
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the internet
 as well as read the books
.
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.
 In conclusion
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,
this
 essay has discussed how the
travel
 is important to know about other cultures as the
comperision
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
compression
comparisons
 of
internet
,
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,
 books along with by films
.
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 The trend of travelling is increasing every passing day.

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