Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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In the cycle of
life
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, people always face some bad things which are that people should confirm with the big heart with those conditions.
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, others believe that there is much opportunity to tackle a bad situation to be a good condition. I think people should consider both of them to get a better
life
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.
To begin
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with, sometimes people should agree from their bad
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life
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life, such
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as unsatisfactory jobs and a low salary because it will maintain their positive thinking. At
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time, people can survive and stay learning from their experiences. They can compare their
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with other
people which
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people, which
take more worst than
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its
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so that people will feel blessed to confirm the situation that bring them to be meaningful and valuable.
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,
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is changing when people can push their ambition to achieve the goal. By taking
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perception, at
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time, their
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will be more active and productive due to the fact that people are occupied with full of motivation to improve their
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and move-out from a bad situation.
For instance
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, the story of Mr. Joko Widodo, the
first
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person in Indonesia, took the journey of his
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which was started at the bottom. He was born in a farmer family who are not rich.
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, his
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has much of motivation so that, currently, He can be the president of Indonesia which is the top position of his career. In conclusion, people should satisfy their
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condition, although
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it is a hard condition.
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, they can change their
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as long as people have a big dream which is supported by keeping active, productive, and motivated.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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