You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
Good day.
I hope my letter finds you well.
I am
Dr.
Mohamed Hawas from X company, and I am writing to you regarding my company's recent all-day meeting reservation in your Change the punctuation
Dr
hotel
.
The meeting took place on the 4th of July, and the participants at the meeting expressed their admiration for the quality of services in the hotel
. Relevantly, they especially liked the hotel
's welcome gestures that were offered in the meeting room,
and the professional attitude of the Remove the comma
apply
hotel
's staff.
On the other hand
, the participants at the meeting were not fully satisfied with the quality of food
. Specifically, they had been complaining about the temperature and diversity of food
during the meeting, till the staff in the meeting room spotted the issue and acted accordingly
.
However
, as we are satisfied about
the overall experience in your Change the preposition
with
hotel
, I would like to suggest that the hotel
can provide more diversity in the food
menu offered for meeting reservation
. Fix the agreement mistake
reservations
Also
, it would be great to continuously check for the temperature of food
.
Thank you a lot in advance, and I am looking forward for
your kind response and future cooperation.
Yours Sincerely,
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to
Dr.
Mohamed HawasChange the punctuation
Dr
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.