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Lots of people in around the world don’t tend to recycle as possible as they could. This essay will discuss the main reasons why this had happened and the foremost effect of the problem.

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Being lazy and being in ignorance ar
e t
Suggestion
is
he main cause of dissatisfaction to do recycle. Separating the
rubbish
 which could recycle from other is difficult for many people so they throw away all of their
rubbish
. Statistics showed Iranian people left their
rubbish
 in the bin while the recyclable and non-recyclable
waste
 are mixed together because they have difficultly recycling.
Also
, lots of people couldn’t distinguish the difference between
rubbish
 which they can recycle and they can’t because they are not trained ,
th
Accept space
,
us they left all of them in the buckets without caring about how recycling is serious.
For example
, Iraq is the biggest producer of
waste
. Their people don’t realize what the wet
waste
 or dry
waste
 is,
therefore
 they generate more and more
rubbish
 without recycling. Not saving recyclable
rubbish
 can do squander resources which is
t
Suggestion
are
he main effect of the problem. People desire to use disposable dishes and cups which made of paper or plastic as they prepare easy access for people and for making these stuffs, lots of trees may be cut down,t
h
Accept space
,
at the end up not doing recycle,m
a
Accept space
,
ny resources are va
nished.
Suggestion
vanishing
For instance
, the large part of to
pical f
relating to or situated in or characteristic of the tropics (the region on either side of the equator)
tropical
orest in Africa ar
e ruined i
Suggestion
is ruined
n order to build paper for textbooks ,
n
Accept space
,
ewspapers and other things which make by paper while by recycling can be prevented to destroy of
this
 forest. In conclusion, being lazy and being in ignorance are the important cause of negligence to do recycling ,
al
Accept space
,
so
waste
 resources is the main effect of
this
 issue. Government can encourage people to
do recycle W
Suggestion
to recycle
ith advertising in TV and show how to save resources like saving jungle.

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