These days fast food become more popular in the modern life . Some people say that it is so convince for those who do not have enough time to prepare their meals while others think that, it is also harmful to people healthy

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It is evident that several adults always using consume the junk
food
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to get more famous in the busy life for teenagers and some younger people in a working day, having some pupils every day to eat their fast
food
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instead
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of spending less time to cook
main meal
Suggestion
a main meal
the main meal
which have not many times in a week when arranging their schedule with target balance it is caused of big
effection
the pathological state resulting from the invasion of the body by pathogenic microorganisms
infection
to
health
Suggestion
healthy
healthier
lifestyle.Of course, the most of the people have been eating many fast
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food
Suggestion
foods
which insatiable appetite during the day.
For example
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,
it
it is
it's
very well known
for
Suggestion
to
everyone by
prepare
Suggestion
preparing
meals occasionally by noodles,
piece
Suggestion
a piece
of pizza or portion of
light meal
Suggestion
light meals
a light meal
.
Moreover
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, it haunted the ready meals
inmy
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in my
country
that is
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why I think they
can not
can not
cannot
make
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
cuisine because big deals more and more. On top of that, we will lose the balance diet that we was destroying them clearly. An unhealthy
food
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have been
influence
Suggestion
influenced
of health assurance
such
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as reduce the mind, lose of state every moderate
dishes
Suggestion
dish
and unclean ingredients.
it
Suggestion
It
get
Suggestion
gets
is getting
threatened - life for younger in many days later because provide many different foods to cater for in society nowadays.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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