As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Apart from focusing on revenue and profit, a business has responsibilities towards the community. I believe

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each company or business has to play their part in improving the lives of people and

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environment. They should strongly follow the best practices which will benefit the world around us and its living beings. Businesses

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to ensure that their products are not affecting

consumers

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health or causing negative side effects in

long

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or short term.

For example

, if a company is selling sugary drinks,

then

the ingredients and the amount of the sugar should be clearly mentioned on the

packing

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. It's their responsibility that the end user is aware of the negative side

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it can cause to the health. Companies can

also

run awareness ad campaigns on television or radio to teach people about the positive

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health benefits due to less sugar consumption though it can decline their profit. Another example of "

social

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responsible" practice can be towards

environment

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the environment

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. Using

re-cyclable

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materials to build or pack an item can be expensive for a company.

However

, if they are not using

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friendly manufacturing material, it can be harmful

for

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the climate or even

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life of animals. We have seen

such

incidents multiple times and there was even a massive awareness campaign by

World

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Wildlife Federation (WWF). In conclusion, a business

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to

the

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society just like another person who is concerned about his or her

well being

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and neighborhood. The reach of an organization's product is far more than an individual person

hence

they should lead and contribute

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the betterment of everyone and

planet

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.