Art is a powerful form of communication and have has become (is) an indispensable part of human civilization. Many argue that artists‘
should be restricted require
to a certain extent to be creative whereas others believe that without complete
of expression an
will not be able to express their his creativity fully (whereas demands that the ideas should be opposite.). In my opinion, while
of expression is important, art must be censored if it contains elements that hurt cultural and religious believes beliefs or instill social and political unrest.
Though the introduction is well structured, it contains several grammatical and lexical resource mistakes. The opinion is clearly expressed.)
Admittedly, an
plays a crucial role in the development of our
by giving us enormous (enormous is used with a measurable noun. Enormous wealth. Not with ideas) novel (
) ideas, opinions and criticisms in the form of pictures, writing, music or films.
can use art and take the values from it to develop a better
and helps to overcome cultural and linguistic boundaries (
sentence should offer an explanation
the previous idea.
: Artists use their imagination to write novels that later inspire movies, and some science fiction books and movies give creative ideas to scientists.).
, artistic
helps to criticize new decisions and changes made by the government in a healthy way and can (Parallelism: criticize should be parallel to suggest.)
improvements.
, eminent artists
as Leonardo Da Vinci and Pablo Picasso have made valuable contributions to the development of
(HOW?
sentence should be an explanation of the
point.).
, a total
without any restriction can adversely affect the
by hurting cultural and religious sentiments of people. To elaborate, there are many instances
wereIn or at or to what place
painters have created God’s and deities in a way which hurt various religions.
I’m sure you can elaborate
point with an example.) Another point to consider is that it unrestricted creative expression can even
create social tension and political unrest. When an
expresses his view in a way that that hurts a particular community or a political party, it can lead to communal riots and political instability.
, recently in India when film Padmavat was released which is a story based on Rajput community in India, it instigated communal riots and violence.
Please create correct sentence structure:
, recently a famous Indian director created a movie Padmavat, which allegedly contained some scenes objectionable
a specific community and
led to minor clashes in various parts of North India.) Following
itof a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
censorship board
its release in certain part of the country to restore peace across the nation.
Though both ideas are well explained, idea 1 could have been better expressed with an example.)
To conclude, it is an undeniable fact that creative
a principal role in the development of the
and artistic
is the fundamental human right.
,
should control arts that hurt religious and cultural sentiments of people in order to maintain peace and harmony among various sections of
.