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People like working for a company rather than starting their own business. Why is this the case? What can be done to encourage people to start their own business?

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A security job provides people a stable fixed monthly wage compared with launching their own businesses.
This
 is because people are afraid of taking a risk due to no funds or no resources to success;
however
, there are many approaches which are supported by governments helping people to set up their firms. Being employed by firms to get guaranteed income is a reliable choice for people. But for start-up enterprises, the money they earn is decided by the market conditions. If their businesses fail to earn profits, it probably goes bankrupt. What is worse, the employers are likely to get into an amount of debt, which may be a case that people do not really consider about having their own firms.
Besides
, it takes a long time to get positive results from their businesses;
therefore
, not everyone has a commitment. The fact that there are not only a number of public resources, guiding
business
 people to run their new businesses but governments are willing to give financial aids.
Firstly
, many new enterprises should get involved with different kinds of public events. To do so,
this
 can help them to avoid making mistakes after listening to others peoples' experience or to understand how to overcome their
business
 difficulties.
Secondly
, governments can implement loan scheme and provide low interest rates, which reduces
business
 peoples' financial pressure. As a consequence, many people are likely to have optimal confidence to run their own companies. In conclusion,
although
 many people tend to work for companies because of steady salary,
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l increase. The governments can provide financial support and the public members can share their experience or knowledge to help one another.
This
 will achieve people to start up. -------------------- the thriving community is essential for good
business
 prefer stable life job satisfaction -
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