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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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It is irrefutable to say that human activities have invited destructive elements
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of
 the planet's
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all the plant life in a particular region or period
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failure
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is harming
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 side, people who believe positivity are the activists who are willing to work for the crisis. Many mass campaigns, workshops can be arranged to order to aware people about the necessary steps to take. Soil quality can be maintained by organic manures. Forest fires are resultant of global warming, making human the culprit. To
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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