The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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It is irrefutable to say that human activities have invited destructive elements

for

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the planet's

flaura

all the plant life in a particular region or period

flora

failure

and fauna. Some segment of society opines that time has gone to take necessary steps while

on the other hand

, some believe positively with the belief that relevant steps can be taken in order to ease the situation. Both views need to be discussed before coming to any logical conclusion. Admittedly, unplanned development at an alarming rate has led to many

problems namely

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problems, namely

deforestation and

pollution which

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pollution, which

ultimately hit the animal and plant species. By and large, clearing of forests, pesticide use

are harming

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is harming

the food chain

Although

it is generally thought by some that repercussions of the mass activities cannot be reversed but their thoughts are not backed by facts.

On the contrary

side, people who believe positivity are the activists who are willing to work for the crisis. Many mass campaigns, workshops can be arranged to order to aware people about the necessary steps to take. Soil quality can be maintained by organic manures. Forest fires are resultant of global warming, making human the culprit. To

recapitilate

summarize briefly

recapitulate

, it is not too late to involve people for the necessary cause in order to

gave

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give

species

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the species

a livable environment. Proper planning and measures can prove

utilarian

having a useful function

utilitarian

long run

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the long run

for the sustainable growth.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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