The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. what are the advantages of this trend? do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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a modern development era
the modern development era
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time
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also
some drawbacks.
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are
time
saving. In modern time
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times
food
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sold
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an oven
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, another
benefits of rising convenience not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
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food
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underprivileged
famalies
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families
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these foods
food
.
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preparing. Firstly
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food
and spoiled food
if they were excessived
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desease
which is an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
diseases
dashes
consedeably
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considerably
considerable
Secondly
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earlier, which
continously
in result, at every point
continuously
food
attraction has also
become less popular.
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time
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