Currently there is a trend towards the use of conventional medicine. However at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous . To what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Currently, there has been a discussion revolving around the
use
of
alternative
medicine
over the conventional
medicine
and its efficacy in treating health conditions.
Alternative
medicine
is not new, It exists since many decades. An enormous number of people trust and
use
the conventional
medicine
all around the world. I am unconvinced that it is dangerous, and feel that both conventional and
alternative
medicine
are equally important.
To begin
with,
Alternative
or traditional
medicine
exist
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exists
even before the emergence of conventional
medicine
. The process of making conventional
medicine
is passed on from our ancestors.
Alternative
medicine
is not accepted widely because of the lack of scientific research into
such
medicines. So there isn’t enough clinical evidence to support it. People always
use
these medicines because of the suggestion from a friend or a family member, so they reach the therapist with a positive attitude and end getting cured of the
illness
.
On the other hand
, the disadvantage of
alternative
medicine
is that it can only treat long term and chronic
illness
. Acute
illness
such
as accident, burns and fracture can only be treated using conventional
medicine
. Even though, it
do not have
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does not have
any clinical supporting data, many people have been treated for medical
illness
and strongly support the
alternative
medicine
.
Furthermore
, certain medical condition that cannot be treated fully with conventional
medicine
can be cured with
alternative
medicine
.
For instance
, the polycystic ovarian disease / syndrome is a hormonal issue which occurs in women couldn’t be treated completely
in
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with
conventional
medicine
. It only stabilizes the hormone and regulate menstruation, it doesn’t have any technique to remove the cyst. In
alternative
medicine it
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medicine, it
is treated using ‘grey nicker ‘seeds.
Alternative
medicines have fewer side effects or in
worst case
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the worst case
the
medicine
will have no power and the
illness
remain the same. One of the pros is these medicines are almost free of cost or less cost so everyone can
use
. Having considered all the arguments, I sum up that both conventional
medicine
and
alternative
medicine
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Medicine
can cure condition
that is
not curable by one or
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
. Conventional
medicine
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medical
aid in
fast
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faster
recovery rather than
alternative
medicine
.
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.
But
alternative
medicine
cures an
illness
from its root. I believe both conventional and
alternative
medicine
are
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is
equally important and useful to treat
illness
.
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