Task 1 A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

#friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties #addresses

Dear Sam, Hello, How are you? Hope you are fine. Thank you a lot, you don't know how you helped me when you agreed to look after my house and my cat (Cooky), I really appreciate that.

Firstly

, In case anything happened while I am far away, you can call me on my new phone number (0525555552) or send me a message on my email.

Also

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Please

aware

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that He has an allergy

from

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Canned Milk and he hates water so, just to stay safe, don't even think to give him a shower.

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, as you are staying at my Home make sure to close all The electricity before going to bed. You know, prevention is better

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that

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cure, and you need to open the windows

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morning

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, to get

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fresh air into the house

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since it is small. I have to leave now again, Thanks to you I will enjoy my Holiday. with Love , Asma

Wed Jan 22 2020

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

158 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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