Task 1 A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Sam, Hello, How are you? Hope you are fine. Thank you a lot, you don't know how you helped me when you agreed to look after my house and my cat (Cooky), I really appreciate that.
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, In case anything happened while I am far away, you can call me on my new phone number (0525555552) or send me a message on my email.
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aware
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that He has an allergy
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Canned Milk and he hates water so, just to stay safe, don't even think to give him a shower.
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, as you are staying at my Home make sure to close all The electricity before going to bed. You know, prevention is better
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that
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cure, and you need to open the windows
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morning
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the morning
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fresh air into the house
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since it is small. I have to leave now again, Thanks to you I will enjoy my Holiday. with Love , Asma

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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