Some people say smoking should be banned on public places. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

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sputable fact tha
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an indisputable fact
indisputable fact
t using ciga
rearette has
finely ground tobacco wrapped in paper; for smoking
cigarette
cigarettes
detrimental consequences individually and socially.Yet, there remi
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any object that is left unused or still extant
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greemet to
a conflict of people's opinions or actions or characters
disagreement
the contrary,whe
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her it would be banned.In
this
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
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cigarette
for that there are two primary reasons as foll
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of all,som
k
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ing in
the act of smoking tobacco or other substances
smoking
out
door whe
located, suited for, or taking place in the open air
outdoor
re there are
peo
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the witness
a witness
t smoker can impact upon to peop
les hea
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people's
lth directly so that not only passive smokers damage their body
but
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body, but
also
causes heart disease, respiratory problems,bra
i
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n stroke,..for
non
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smoker.As it is clear it wont
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won't
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sive ones not
use
cigarette
among the all citizens.
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gh, recently the number of all range groups of mankinds smoke unfortunately
this
is
one
source of pollution.Statistic shows that
this
kind
s of
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kind
harmful materials when exist in the circumstances are jeopardised wild
life and
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
nature.There is a sali
ant exa
having a quality that thrusts itself into attention
salient
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this
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consider in a comprehensive way
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plants, one
one
group was out
side in
beyond the boundary of; external to
outside
fresh air and othe
r in
any of various alternatives; some other
another
public place with polu
ted air
rendered unwholesome by contaminants and pollution
polluted
condition
as a result
the
second
one
was disa
ppered
get lost, as without warning or explanation
disappeared
however
the
first
one
was growing fast
ly.
with rapid movements
quickly
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use
the leaf they consume excessively it causes that youngsters in the early age encourage people around them to adic
tton to har
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addiction, to
addiction to
mful material so these people want to try heavy material because they cant
mee
can not
can't
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of them or themselves
their
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ort aft
made comfortable or more comfortable in a time of distress
comforted
er creating
this
miss
arble lif
very unhappy; full of misery
miserable
e their family just spent high
amount of
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a high amount
money to clinics and hospitals to survive their chil
derin. By
a young person of either sex
children
way of conc
lution,gen
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
consolation
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rally,
this
does not insu
rmontable bec
not capable of being surmounted or overcome
insurmountable
ause all of us are human being smoker should perc
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right of oter
s try to
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others, try
others try
voters try
not
use
cigarette
among others till all be sati
sfided .
filled with satisfaction
satisfied
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.

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