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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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It is popular that lots of people make their choices
to work
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work
 as a self-employed
instead
 of working as an employee for enterprises or offices.
This
 essay will
first
 discuss which reasons contribute to the option of self-employing and it will address the negative effects it will probably bring. To start with, in modern societies, especially in China, entrepreneurship is considered to be successful and respectful so the majority of adults are eager to set up their own
business
 and become a successful entrepreneur.
Secondly
, being
employment
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employed
 is always doing a routine
work whereas
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work, whereas
 being an owner of any stores can be to conduct his personal ideas and thought.
Last
 but not least, if people have their own way of earning money, they would be working more flexibly than employment allows for. With regards to the possible negative effect, I think many adults in the self-employ will be anxious about their future once their
business
 are encountering fierce competition, which is not good
to
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for
 family and society.
Although
 there are some successful individuals who giving up
formal job
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a formal job
 for founding their own
business
, lots of people meet sorts of difficulties and challenges and even suffer uncountable failures in their
business
.
Moreover
,
business
 means fight so self-employ persons can not avoid struggling for worrying about the survival of their businesses even though they are running in good conditions. In conclusion, being self-employed
have
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has
 the opportunity to be a successful entrepreneur and exert
individual’s
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individual
 intelligences and freedom in
work
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workable
 rhyme so that a lot of adults make their decision not to be an employee of firms or offices anymore.
However
, self-
employer
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employed
 will be always anxious about their
business
, which is social and family issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • company
  • organization
  • freedom
  • independence
  • income potential
  • flexibility
  • working hours
  • working location
  • passions
  • interests
  • decision-making
  • business practices
  • disadvantages
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