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Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose which one is a better way of action according to you.

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Every person has their own views, plans and style of following their own learning methodologies for exam preparation. Some people could digest the whole book in one single night before exam while, some
likes
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like
 to read through regular intervals during normal academics with a proper plan and execution. I always
opine
cause to open or to become open
open
 to follow the regular study patterns that
has
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have
 more advantages. In
this
 essay, some of the advantages and disadvantages of both study methodologies are discussed in detail. To start with disadvantages,
last
 minute or overnight preparation is always associated with some pressure to complete the chapters in a short span.
This
 will provide no benefit of gaining a detailed knowledge in deep level to the readers and it could lead to more stress at final moment that will not make any person to remember the concepts.
On the other hand
, preparing at regular intervals always helps the learners to understand
the deep
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the deeper
 concepts in a detailed way by experimenting through various concepts. Particularly the mathematics and scientific theories
always involves
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always involve
thorough
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a thorough
 practicing throughout.
This
 way, any student could just revise the concepts before appearing for
actual tests
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the actual tests
. But some people
claims
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claim
this
 to be very slow and tedious process which are least bothered by vivid readers or learners. In conclusion, the advantages of reading at slow pace always
overweighs
usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
otherwise
 the
noctornal
belonging to or active during the night
nocturnal
 learning habits.
Hence
, I always support the former one which has long time benefits for any individual.
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