Immigration has a major impact on atge society What are the main reasons for immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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Immigration
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has a major phenomenon
on
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of
the society. Every year, major number of people all over the world migrate from their home country to another place or city.
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essay will elaborate and examine the reasons and implications of
immigration
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. In my perspective, the major reason for
immigration
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is
better standard
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a better standard
of living conditions and safe future. A lot of people moved from
third
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world war countries to
develop
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developing
developed
countries due to poor financial state in their home countries, war and better employment opportunities.
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,
leaving
the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities
living
in a high income country implicates better job opportunities,
quality life
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quality, life
and good standard of living.
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, the
immigration
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of Nigerians to Canada, most of the families moved because the use of economy is not suitable and sustainable for them, seeking security and good future for their children. Many go through the seeking asylum process just to get sustainable income and quality standard of living.
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, sometimes migrating causes more problems than solutions to both the countries and the immigrants.
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of all, the consequences of migrating to seek
asykum
a shelter from danger or hardship
asylum
in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
countries will force the countries to provide shelter and good
leaving
the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities
living
conditiona
the prevailing context that influences the performance or the outcome of a process
conditions
for immigrants. Finding a job in the said country can be difficult due to language skill and difficulties in adaptation as well as increase in population density.
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, highly qualified immigrant may not find the appropriate employment they are hoping to get. In conclusion,
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I
think that people immigrate to get a better life prospects,
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life after
immigration
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may not meet their expectations.

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