Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?
These days almost every house contains
computer
technology
and most people to access that technology
has a great impact on young children. It seems to me that computer
technology
primarily to affects children`s health both their eyes and brains when they sit a long time
in front of the computer
.
Firstly
, it is undeniable that computers have some negative effects on our children. Especially when they want
to play a game on the Suggestion
wanted
computer
at that time
, they did not rely on how long time
they spent in front of him. In this
situation, they get a negative effect on both site l mean from the computer
and also
from the game. For example
, during the game, they fell
themselves as a hero and start to fight with their rival and mat together and make felt-like
felt
use
some of the violent actions which could affect their brain and unconsciously adopt this
activity as a normal. After a while, they could start to use
the same habits in their normal life
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life, such
such
as school when they fell some children as their rivals. On the other hand
, they could use
their computer
for social activities or making new friends. In this
case, they perhaps get some of the virtual friends but
it is not a real Accept comma addition
friends, but
one
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one, that
that is
why in real life they fell
themselves lonely.
In spite of mat together and make felt-like
felt
this
, we obviously know that computers have so many benefits for young children. With this
technology
, they easily could develop their knowledge and intellectual side. Despite of this
, we could not forget that their negative effect also
. In this
case, l think parents must ensure that their children use
these technologies positive sites. On the one hand, they must use
some of the time
limits for their children`s health
sake to avoid them to spend a lot of Suggestion
health's
time
in front of a computer
.
In conclusion, if we considering
all of the above it is obvious to show us computers have a serious effect on young children`s life. But in other cases, with their parents' guide, they could benefit from Suggestion
consider
are considering
this
technology
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