Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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Animals are an essential part of our ecosystem. The extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity is due to an effect of human beings on world's ecosystem
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ideology as well as I will shed light on its effective solutions in following paragraphs before embarking on conclusion
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with, there are some reasons of loss of bio-diversity;
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of all is deforestation, trees and plants are chopped by humans for various work
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as making paper, house, medicine and many more.
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use of paper is less nowadays due to technology, it is essential in many fields due to fulfil their needs, humans are cutting trees.
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, cutting trees
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have an effect on ecosystem, trees helps to maintain the temperature of environment as compare to other past temperature is extremely high so many species do not live comfortable and they will die.
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, not only deforestation, population is
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main cause of loss of bio-diversity

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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