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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People have different views about efficient ways of diminishing
traffic
 accidents.
Although
 there are good arguments in favour of strong punishments for
offensive
Suggestion
offending
 drivers, I
also
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
 that there are other measurements available to take to surpass road
safety
.
On the other hand
, it can be argued that those who drive offensively and carelessly on roads should be punished strictly due to the bad happenings they result. Unless
such
 punishments were put into practice by the government, the rate of
traffic
 accidents would likely to continue surging.
As a result
, not only drivers but
also
 passengers might come across with more and more life threatening problems. Take, corporal punishment or a prison sentence
,
Accept space
,
for example
, criminals who are charged with these punishments may
detter
try to prevent; show opposition to
deter
 other would-be criminals to cause
further
 accidents by setting good role models.
On the other hand
, there are people who purport the existence of other sensible solutions that may contribute to the improvement of road
safety
. An increasing fine can be seen as a good avenue in
this
 sense. To be more precise, the more people make accidents the more they have to pay the increased amount of the fine and
this
 may send out a good message to them, and others, as well. What's more, governments can
also
 organize pressure groups each and every
parts
Suggestion
part
 of
country
Suggestion
the country
. Those people come over there and raise awareness of public about the fatal repercussions of
traffic
 accidents.
This
 might
also
 help to increase
the
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safety on the roads
safety
 on roads. In conclusion, it seems to me that both strenuous punishments as well as other soft options can help people provide with better
safety
 on roads by decreasing
traffic
 accidents.
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