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Describe a situation or a time when you helped someone

#situation #time #someone
I helped many people in my life, among all of
them I
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them, I
 remember one of my
help
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helpers
. It was happening when I was going to college. I saw a vehicle accident in front of me. Uncle was suffering from illness Uncle was unknown to me. I helped him because He was suffering from illness. I couldn't say that.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 I helped him. When I saw him at that time I don't know what to
do but
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do, but
 after that, I called ambulances and admitted him to the nearest hospital. I was with him that night and get food from outside for him. I
also
 had called his son mobile and talked about all of the situations.
after
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After
 that, I took permission to leave his son on that night. I can't forget that day in my life because I saw a smile and happiness on uncle's face for me. That was an awesome moment for me. I remember that
day every
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day, every
 day in my life. Thank you

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