Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?

Despite the fact that
language
is the most inevitable medium of communication, many would protest against the idea of having a singular
language
around the world. I differ with
such
a protest and agree to a large extent that
such
a
language
may be
beneficial
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more beneficial
rather than
beign
the state or fact of existing
being
been
an impediment. The biggest advantage would be smoothing of communication amongst the people.
Infact
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In fact
,
such
linguistic experiments have been
done
produced by a manufacturing process
made
by some countries who are multilingual. A good example of
this
is India and China, where Hindi is the national
language
for
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of
in
from
the former and Mandrain
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
has been officially rated by the
latte
the second of two or the second mentioned of two
latter
. There are several other gains too.
For instance
, single
language
would make the process of documentation
easy
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easier
, there shall be no need of translators, it can serve as a common
language
between man and machine and
finally
it has proved by
reseach
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
researcher
researches
and survey that people who speak
same
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the same language
language
think quite
similar
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similarly
.
This
can diminish culture biases.
However
, it must not be taken for granted that
this
idea may be instantly successful. In my
opinion there
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opinion, there
is a risk of native
language
and the innumerable dialects may become extinct.
Morever
in addition
Moreover
, it may either be
rejects
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rejected
rejecting
or may not be well adapted by the elderly population, extremely religious and orthodox culture or illiterate people.
Thus
, in the light of
above discussion it
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the above discussion, it
the above discussion it
can be
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
that
although
there are few dangers in creating and implementing a new
langauage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
, my argument
prove
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proves
that it shall be more beneficial if methodically introduced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International communication
  • Cultural unity
  • Trade and business facilitation
  • Language barriers
  • Global education systems
  • International diplomacy
  • Political negotiations
  • Linguistic and cultural identities
  • Resistance
  • Native languages
  • Implementation challenges
  • Vocabulary and grammar rules
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