The recent popularity of online shopping will result in the end of high street shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the advent of internet accessibility, more and more people are buying things online. Some believe that shopping online can eliminate the need of high

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shops while others believe that it can not. I agree with the latter as people still care for the

quality

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and prefer seeing in hand

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shopping is seen as a

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time

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event to spend with others.

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with the build or texture of a material cannot be known just by looking at pixels on the screen. It is important for people to get the feel of the material they are spending money on.

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example I

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example, I

had just bought a branded shirt online which looked fabulous on the

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screen, but

upon seeing it myself after getting

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bring to a destination, make a delivery

delivered

, the

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of the cloth felt cheap and was from a different brand and later I had to go through the hassle of returning the same item. Since

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I prefer

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shops to buy things as I won't have to worry about the

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of the material after the payment.

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, people expect original and good

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product when they buy which cannot be guaranteed by online shops.

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, shopping is still considered as an event when we get to spend

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and socialise with friends and family.

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almost everything can be bought online, in today's

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age, most

of our day is spent sitting

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a computer so rather than spending more

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on the screen heading out to shop. To exemplify, whenever me and my friends want to meet we prefer meeting at high

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shops as help each other out in selecting things to

buy but

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buy, but

most importantly spend

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catching up on things and talk face to face.

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, people consider

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shopping

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to socialise and spend good

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with each other. In conclusion, online shopping completely replacing high

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shops seems impractical as the authenticity of the product bought is always questionable for the buyers and

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shopping brings friends and families together to spend

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with each other.