Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries the use of alternative source of energy is encouraged . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement . It is a positive or negative development .

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Undoubtedly
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the main source of energy is fossil
fuel
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Although
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in my
ideology I
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ideology, I
am accord with
this
statement due to two reason global warming as well as health issues.
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However, it
is
negative development
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a negative development
because it is badly affected
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by
the
environment
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Some countries are worried about
this
so they take stern steps to face
this
problem
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To being with
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the
use
of fossil fuels
is are
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is
has been
is being
environment
friendly because it is
big reason
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a big reason
for global warming
.
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For
example through
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example, through
the burning fossil
fuel
created
high rate
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a high rate
of air and water pollution as well as the amount of carbon dioxide is
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due to
this
the chance of global warming is increasing
.
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Apart from that people are breath in the polluted
air
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air, then
then
they face many
type
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types
of problems related to their health
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It is not common because
breath
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the breath
in
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of
polluted air is a reason for the asthma and other breath related issues
.
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However
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some countries take the priority to the
use
of other natural sources like solar and wind power rather than the
use
fossil
fuel
.
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By the
use
of natural resources people can make the electricity without any damage and they can
use
any time to that energy
.
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Moreover
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solar and wind power is
environment
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environmentally
friendly
,
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,
it
reduce
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reduces
the chances if global
warming along
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warming, along
with floods and other environmental disease.
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Thus, it
is important every country's authority to take
hard step
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hard steps
the hard step
to
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solve
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these
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problems
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In conclusion
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this
essay has discussed how the fossil
fuel
is not right for
environment
growth
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growth, such
such
as global warming and health problems
.
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However
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it is
negative development
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a negative development
for the society as well as
environment
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the environment
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So it is important for the government
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,
they make some rules and
also
organise some awareness camps.

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