Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries the use of alternative source of energy is encouraged . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement . It is a positive or negative development .

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Undoubtedly

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the main source of energy is fossil

fuel

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in my

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ideology, I

am accord with

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statement due to two reason global warming as well as health issues.

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However it

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However, it

is

negative development

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a negative development

because it is badly affected

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by

the

environment

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Some countries are worried about

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so they take stern steps to face

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problem

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To being with

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the

use

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of fossil fuels

is are

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is

has been

is being

environment

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friendly because it is

big reason

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a big reason

for global warming

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example through

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example, through

the burning fossil

fuel

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created

high rate

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a high rate

of air and water pollution as well as the amount of carbon dioxide is

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(often followed by 'to') having a preference, disposition, or tendency

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due to

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the chance of global warming is increasing

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Apart from that people are breath in the polluted

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air, then

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they face many

type

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types

of problems related to their health

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It is not common because

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the breath

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of

polluted air is a reason for the asthma and other breath related issues

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some countries take the priority to the

use

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of other natural sources like solar and wind power rather than the

use

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fossil

fuel

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.

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By the

use

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of natural resources people can make the electricity without any damage and they can

use

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any time to that energy

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solar and wind power is

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environment

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environmentally

friendly

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,

it

reduce

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reduces

the chances if global

warming along

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warming, along

with floods and other environmental disease.

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Thus it

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Thus, it

is important every country's authority to take

hard step

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hard steps

the hard step

to

solution

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solve

solving

solves

solved

these

problem

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problems

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In conclusion

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this

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essay has discussed how the fossil

fuel

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is not right for

environment

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growth

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growth, such

such

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as global warming and health problems

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it is

negative development

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a negative development

for the society as well as

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environment

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the environment

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So it is important for the government

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they make some rules and

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organise some awareness camps.