The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Changes in the construction structure of Queen Marry hospital over a period of 40 years since its construction in 1960 are shown in the maps below. The hospital’s development is captured into three different stages, namely; 1960, 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, it is conspicuously apparent that the hospital has increased in size. Additionally
, a new cancer centre
and a nursing school
have been built and extended, resulting in a significant downsizing – almost 50%- in the capacity of the car
park
.
In 1960, the hospital was constructed near to
the main road and Change preposition
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next
to a shopping centre
. The large area behind the hospital was occupied by a car
park
and the land behind the shopping centre
was a
farmland.
By 1980, two new hospital buildings, namely; a pharmacy and a cancer Remove the article
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centre
were built after the shopping centre
was demolished to make a room for the new facilities. Furthermore
, the hospital obtained the farmland and turned it into a nursing school
.
In 2000, the cancer centre
was extended to cover the whole area of the nursing school
. As a result
, the car
park
was divided into two parts so that it provided a smaller car
park
and a small nursing school
. The main hospital building remained unchanged.Submitted by baykalmeliksah on
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